Morning comes,
A monochrome grey,
Is it that time already?
The alarm rings,
His favourite song,
It reminds him of
a night just spent
In the arms of the lover,
Who still sleeps by his side,
Hope he is dreaming
Of me and the night
Now gone, in its place
Just monochrome grey.
This is my first attempt at verse (I hesitate to call it poetry) so please be kind. I composed it this morning when my alarm went of at 06:30am and the room was a kind of monochrome grey.
I like it. I fiddle with poetic attempts from time to time. Reminds me of one I wrote about reach out (in the morning) and no-one was next to me. I’ll add the link later, got to cook !!
Thank you, Rough Seas. Yes, do post the link as I’d like to read your poem. 😃
I saw in my email inbox this morning that you had a new post and I was like “OH HELLZ YEAH.”
I love this. Hope to see more poetry from you, because it’s wonderful!
Ah, thank you hunny. *blush* I am having problems liking and commenting on your Chocolate post. I’ll try again. Grrrrrrr!!!
Very nice. Lots of emotion in there.
I’m pants at poetry but I write a mean limerick.
Thank you, sweetie☺I’d love to see some of your limericks. Any chance?
Here you go:)
http://cloudsmovingin.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/reach-out/
The others I’ve written are under poetry category on the sidebar.
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